“Show, don’t tell.” It’s a mantra repeated in writing workshops and plastered across online forums, but what does it really mean? And how can you master this essential storytelling technique?
At its core, “show, don’t tell” is about engaging your readers’ senses and imaginations. Instead of simply stating facts or emotions, you invite readers to experience the story firsthand through vivid descriptions, actions, and sensory details.
Telling: “John was angry.”
Showing: “John’s face flushed crimson. He slammed his fist on the table, rattling the plates, and his voice boomed through the room.”
See the difference? The “showing” example paints a picture, allowing readers to infer John’s anger through his actions and physical reactions.
Here are some practical tips to help you “show” more and “tell” less:
- Use strong verbs and vivid descriptions: Replace weak verbs like “was” and “looked” with more dynamic options. Instead of saying “The room was messy,” try “Clothes lay scattered across the floor, books teetered in precarious stacks, and a half-eaten bowl of cereal sat precariously on the edge of the desk.”
- Engage the five senses: Don’t just describe what your characters see; immerse readers in the world by incorporating sounds, smells, tastes, and textures.
- Focus on actions and reactions: Instead of telling readers how a character feels, show them through their actions, body language, and dialogue.
- Use dialogue strategically: Dialogue can reveal character, advance the plot, and provide information without resorting to telling.
- Embrace figurative language: Metaphors, similes, and other literary devices can add depth and nuance to your writing, allowing you to show emotions and experiences in a more evocative way.
A Note on Telling:
While “show, don’t tell” is a valuable guideline, it’s important to remember that telling has its place in storytelling. Sometimes, you need to provide concise information or summarize events to maintain the flow of your narrative. The key is to strike a balance between showing and telling, using each technique strategically to create a dynamic and engaging reading experience.
A Wonderful Resource:
For a deeper dive into the art of showing and telling, I highly recommend Anne Lamott’s “Bird by Bird.” This insightful and humorous guide offers practical advice and encouragement for writers of all levels.
By mastering the art of “show, don’t tell,” you can transform your writing from simple narration to immersive storytelling that captivates readers and leaves a lasting impression.